Glossary entry (derived from question below)
Russian term or phrase:
Особенно жестко будет контролироваться
English translation:
especially tight controls
Added to glossary by
Nicholas Krivenko
Jun 1, 2008 23:10
16 yrs ago
Russian term
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Native in: Russian 
Works in: English to Russian, Russian to English, Spanish to Russian, and 1 more.
Особенно жестко будет контролироваться
Russian to English
Tech/Engineering
Business/Commerce (general)
Подобные изменения в законодательстве усиливают государственное регулирование рынка. Особенно жестко будет контролироваться деятельность крупных частных компаний.
Proposed translations
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Change log
Jun 7, 2008 23:19: Nicholas Krivenko Created KOG entry
Proposed translations
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Nicholas Krivenko
Ireland
Ireland
Native in English
Specializes in field
Ireland
30 years in translation & interpreting!
Native in: German , English
Works in: German to English, English to German, Russian to English, and 5 more.
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especially tight controls
One way of putting it:
The activities of large private companies/enterprises will be subject to especially tight controls.
Another way:
Especially tight check will be kept on activities / business of large private enterprises.
The activities of large private companies/enterprises will be subject to especially tight controls.
Another way:
Especially tight check will be kept on activities / business of large private enterprises.
4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer.
Comment: "Thank you very much, Nicholas."
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A special, strict check-up will be given to the
... and so on.
Peer comment(s):
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Michael Tovbin
: check-up - медицинский (или технический) осмотр. Вся фраза звучит по-английски несколько странно.
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I agree/ would like to change it for "monitoring"
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Terry Moran
: Not English: a check-up isn't given, it's conducted or carried out. And Michael Tovbin is right, it's the wrong word anyway.
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Michael Tovbin
United States
United States
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&
English
Works in field
United States
Commitment to Quality and Deadlines
Native in: English (Variant: US) , Russian (Variant: Standard-Russia)
Works in: Russian to English, French to English, English to Russian, and 1 more.
Related KudoZ points
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Large corporations will be subject to particularly/extra close monitoring
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Peer comment(s):
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Andrey Belousov (X)
: Радует - что мой "мониторинг" - не только мой./ Тронут до слёз. Пусть будет так.
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Monitoring принадлжеит английскому языку./Андрей, если у Вас ко мне имеется претензия, так и пишите. Не люблю иносказаний.
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Yelena Sari (X)
: good job
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Nicholas Krivenko
: IMHO, "monitoring" suggests observing without interfering. "The UN will monitor the situation" means just that, but here the implication seems to be that the state will keep businesses under observation and interfere whenever it feels like it.
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Feruza Dostie
United States
United States
Native in Russian
Specializes in field
United States
accurate and thorough translation, 20 y
Native in: Russian , Uzbek
Works in: English to Russian, Russian to English, Uzbek to English, and 1 more.
will be under strict government control
-control - здесь не регулирование, а надзор
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Note added at 14 hrs (2008-06-02 13:26:53 GMT)
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In politics, command and control refers more generally to the maintenance of authority with somewhat more distributed decision making. In these civilian contexts, the term command is unfashionable but the meaning is the same. ( Wikipedia)
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Note added at 14 hrs (2008-06-02 13:26:53 GMT)
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In politics, command and control refers more generally to the maintenance of authority with somewhat more distributed decision making. In these civilian contexts, the term command is unfashionable but the meaning is the same. ( Wikipedia)
Peer comment(s):
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Michael Tovbin
: Могу только сослаться на первоисточник - словарь Вэбстера. Там прямо дается синонимия - control = regulate. Самое прямое значение слова - управлять/управление. Контроль - не управление, а проверка корректности, правильности, соответствия.
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